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Monday, 22 September 2014

Noticing Paragraphs

Box 1 

We went to my Uncle’s house because it was my cousins’ birthday. He had a birthday cake and on it there were ten candles.He blew them out with a big puff ! But they wouldn't blow out and my Uncle started dancing and we said”he was being silly “ So  we went outside and played on the bouncy castle.



Box 2
We went to my Uncle’s house because it was my cousins’ birthday.His name is jack and he is turning ten years old.

He had a birthday cake and on it there were ten candles.He blew them out with a big puff ! But they wouldn't blow out.His cake was favored chocolate. It tasted Delicious.

and my Uncle started dancing  like a chicken and we said ”he was being  a  crazy clown”  

So  we went outside and played on the bouncy castle. The Bouncy castle was shaped like a dragon and was coloured green.It was really really REALLY awesome.



Me and Class 10 have been learning to notice Paragraphs. this is what we have been learning
We are learning to ...
1. Add appropriate punctuation . , ! " " ? :
2. Find the Main Ideas in the text
3. Organise ideas in order to separate into paragraphs
4.Add more detail to ideas or sentences ( Vocab,sentence type



1 comment:

  1. Hi Alisha your noticing paragraphs looks amazing.

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