Walt : use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader.
I would recommend the product a ten out of ten. By a reason of it tasted unique and delicious. The sight of it had weird shapes with hidden black dots within the creamy brown chocolate was a bit concerning. But above a ten out of ten.
Description of learning :
The Product is Chocolate, it is Marvellous creation.
The Marvellous Creations popping candy had a lot of flavour. It felt like a flavour bomb popping in my mouth. It’s king size chocolate and the price was $5.40.The Aroma had a little hint of Coca Cola.
The Dark Chocolate, had rectangles on it’s surface. It’s taste was really unique, it had a taste of Milky and brown Chocolate. I would not give it any improvements at all.
I would recommend the product a ten out of ten. By a reason of it tasted unique and delicious. The sight of it had weird shapes with hidden black dots within the creamy brown chocolate was a bit concerning. But above a ten out of ten.
We tasted the chocolates without knowing the flavour. We did that because when we know what we are eating it changes the way our brain thinks about it, it was really cool. When we did this we had to fill out this taste observation sheet of what we saw, felt, tasted, and smelt. We had to write one or two words that describes the chocolate, and then recaft into a fully detailed sentence. When we were writing we tried to paint a picture in our readers mind, because we wanted our reader to have a good idea of what we are taking about. If I would rate this chocolate I would give it a 10 out of 10.
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