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______________________________________________________Today is the last post of 2015, but I'll keep posting in the holidays.
I'll be back
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Teacher explained we were going on a website. What was the website about - What kind of website - What did you do.What animal cams and videos I watched and which animals were they about.
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Which animal did I do - Sumatran Tiger animal 1 -
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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Which animal did I do - Lemurs
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the San Diego Zoo
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the North Pole.Penguins eat a range of fish and other sea life that they catch underwater.Penguins can drink sea water.Penguins spend around half their time in water and the other half on land.The Emperor Penguin is the tallest of all penguin species, reaching as tall as 120 cm, 47 in the height.Emperor Penguins can stay underwater for around 20 minutes at a time.Emperor Penguins often huddle together to keep warm in the cold temperatures of Antarctica.King Penguins are the second largest penguin specie. They have four layers of feathers to help keep them warm on the cold subarctic islands where they breed.Chinstrap Penguins get their name from the thin black band under their head. At times it looks like they’re wearing a black helmet, which might be useful as they’re considered the most aggressive type of penguin.Crested penguins have yellow crests, as well as red bills and eyes.
Frog Eggs and Swamp Water Gross ! I guess we were having a Fear Factor Challenge. It’s a Show that people do gross things and weird challenges. But before we had our very own one we, watched a video that had two people eating Bugs, Blood, Worms, Rat hair chips and Maggots (the blood was real.) Now it’s time for Room 6 Fear Factor. And I can’t wait to see who are the Constants ?
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About Fear Factor
what is it
Why did we do it
Where it was
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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Who picked for Room 6 Fear factor
how everyone was trying to get pick.
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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What they ate ?
Mr Goodwin said it was frog eggs and Creek water
But turned out that it was baked Beans without the sauce and kiwifruit juice
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the fear factor challenge
why you don’t try this fear factor challenge at home.
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The final day of Term 3 at Pt England school has passed. But I have to say that my highlight of the term was definitely the School Production. The School Production was amazing, spectacular and other words that I can't express. The first time I saw the Production was this week on Tuesday I went by myself and turns out it was so interesting. So that's my highlight. Have a GREAT holiday everyone. And for people who like my blog and visiting it , then I've got GREAT news for you because I'm going to be blogging in the Holidays and during that I'm going to be blogging really well.
Do you know what we did when we got to the park. Well I’ll give you a little hint : balancing an egg ! Well if you guess balancing an egg then you are correct ! So Anyway when we got to the park we stopped by the corner and Mr Goodwin gave our next instructions. After he first gave our instructions he gave out spoons. It was really hard, because we had to balance our little friends on spoons.
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Write for my reader
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I've tried to think about my reader
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My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
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My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
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My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
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Purpose
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I tried to meet the purpose
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My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
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The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
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My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
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Introduction
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My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
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My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
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My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction wows my reader!
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Paragraph Topics
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My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
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I have tried to follow my plan.Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
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My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
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My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
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