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______________________________________________________Today is the last post of 2015, but I'll keep posting in the holidays.
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1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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Teacher explained we were going on a website. What was the website about - What kind of website - What did you do.What animal cams and videos I watched and which animals were they about.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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Which animal did I do - Sumatran Tiger animal 1 -
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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Which animal did I do - Lemurs
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the San Diego Zoo
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1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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About Fear Factor
what is it
Why did we do it
Where it was
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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Who picked for Room 6 Fear factor
how everyone was trying to get pick.
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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What they ate ?
Mr Goodwin said it was frog eggs and Creek water
But turned out that it was baked Beans without the sauce and kiwifruit juice
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the fear factor challenge
why you don’t try this fear factor challenge at home.
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Recount Writing
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Write for my reader
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I've tried to think about my reader
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My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
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My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
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My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
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Purpose
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I tried to meet the purpose
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My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
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The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
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My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
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Introduction
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My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
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My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
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My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction wows my reader!
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Paragraph Topics
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My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
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I have tried to follow my plan.Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
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My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
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My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
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